My Shayari

After a long time i'm posting something on my blog. Now-a-days i'm trying my hand at writing shayaris, sounds wierd, i know, so thought why not just put one here. Now if no one comes across it, its good, but if u do see it, and understand, plz give me ur opinion, i wanna improve my writings. so here it is...

Gum ke aashiyane mein kuch armaan pale bade,
Nadan, nasamajh, pure na hue toh ro pade,
Hum bhi kya samjhaye un dewano ko,

Jab hum bhi aansu chupane ke liye unhe paani ki tarah pi gaye.

It sounds like written after a broken heart, but no. had one and thts enough. this just came out from nowhere.